Wednesday, 19 March 2014

The Oath of Vayuputras: Disappoints

Originally written on: 19th March 2013

The face of Indian bestselling authors has changed. A throne occupied (unfortunately) by Chetan Bhagat for the better part of last decade is now home to Amish Tripathi. If you don’t agree, you are welcome to check the frenzied pre-booking orders registered on Flipkart a couple of months prior to the release. He is a celebrity… his bad writing be damned!
Amish shot to fame after his debute novel Meluha, became a sleeper and surprise success. The book  was a delightful new approach to our mythology, chronicling the journey of a man whose deeds made him the God. Lord Shiva is just Shiva, a simple Tibetian leader whose strong morals and a strange twist of fate make him the God of people.
The Oath of the Vayuputras is a much awaited finale to the trilogy, and is preceded by The Immortals of Meluha and The Secret of Nagas.



What is evil? 
The trilogy centers around this question. The first book clearly tilts the arrow towards Chandravanshi’s who disrupt the apparently harmonious lives of Meluhans. This logic is dispelled at the end, when Shiva (branded Neelkanth by the Meluhans) wages a war against the Chandravanshi’s to realize that they too see a saviour in him. The second book significantly narrows down the evil to be associated to the Nagas (deformed humans) but half way through even this belief is challenged.

 The Oath of the Vayuputras picks up where Nagas left and the reader along with Shiva inches closer to the real Evil. In a predictable twist, the real evil is revealed or to quote the author ‘Anything good is bound to turn evil at some point.’ Now Shiva, along with his trusted aides, must challenge the entire country to give up this evil which they hold dearer than their families. Opposition is met at predictable corners and the book offers no real surprise or twist.
We learn more about the mysterious Vasudevs and a new set of characters, Vayuputras, are introduced. None of the races leave an impact equivalent to the characters or societies introduced in the previous book. In terms of plot, the novel is a ‘Travel Guide to Ancient India’ and has very less basic story. It is an endless river of monologues and strategies which don’t read well when executed. Amish’s sloppy writing was a concern in the Nagas but the magnificent twists and wholesome content compensated for it, which unfortunately, is not the case with the final book.

The story blends the line between History and Mythology (and tons of Geography
  ) with interesting insights from the author.
The existing characters take turns to be foolish, greedy, naive, honor-bound, weak or passionate causing hurdles for the well-meaning group. Shiva, the protagonist, retains his intelligence, humility and sense of humor and you have no option but love, adore and worship him. A character that refuses to leave you  long after you close the book, is Shiva’s wife, Sati. She is extremely well-written by the author as a woman of substance. Her battle sequences are described commendably well as she fights with valor and vigor. She is the sole reason you will have a lump in your throat towards the climax.
The ending though…  disappoints.

*Best I could write without revealing the story.

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